Feedback/Revisions

After presenting my Mid Term Submission magazine, I got a good amount of feedback back to me. The feedback was more positive than negative, which boosted my confidence in my magazine submission.  I got back things that I did good on my magazine and things I need to improve on in the next quarter. A few of the good things I got back include, good quality/choice of photos, cool and fun "eye catching" fonts, great color choice that helped in creating a central theme, and a clean cover/article layout. Those were all some of my biggest goals in making this magazine and in also replicating magazines researched, so to achieve that was fulfilling. As go the compliments, there was also tips or ideas that could be added to my magazine to bring it to the "next level". There was at least one negative idea in each piece of feedback I received, some very crucial revisions that need to be made, while others will just enhance my magazine. The negative feedback included a hard to follow Table of Contents, too small of fonts on the main article, fonts and subtexts needing more variation, and specific photos weren't as enhanced or bolded as they should be. So, as I went through the negative feedback, I wrote down some of the major revisions I could make to better my 3rd Quarter Submission. Some revisions include, fixing my Table of Contents format to be easier to follow, making my fonts more consistent and fixing sizing of subtexts on my cover page, making my two page spread have larger fonts on the article, lowering the opacity on the main article picture to become more bold, and adding frames to intensify pictures throughout the whole magazine. I am very grateful to have gotten back the feedback that I did. I believe every compliment helped me ensure that what I was doing was great and on the right track. While every negative idea or tip helped me take a step back and re-evaluate a few things. All of the revisions I will make this quarter are going to help my magazine appeal to my target audience more, make it more professional resembling, and help display my overall purpose and central idea I am trying to get across. They will all assist in helping more people of Sarasota become more fit and healthy by the reading of my magazine submission and revision choices I made, based on feedback received.