Revision #3- Article

For my 2 page article spread, I made a lot of changes, as it was the area needed for most improvement. The revisions I needed to make were decreasing picture opacity, making the font larger for the article and captions, adding more branding, and adjusting picture sizes. To start, I first decreased the opacity of my first article photo. I got many comments saying the photo was difficult to see and disrupted with the overall design/"look" of the page. I decreased it from brightness 70% contrast 40% to brightness 60% contrast 50%. This helped make the photo more visible and appealing. Next, I increased the font size of the article text because when I did a viewing of it, the article was hard to read due to the size of the words. I could only increase the font size so much, due to the long length of my article and the little space provided . I went from 10 - 11.5 on my article font size and 7 - 9/10 for my caption sizes. Next, I added more branding to the bottom of my page. I didn't want to add too much, so I added our Instagram/Twitter account name "@sotawellnessmag" to the bottom corner. I did this for both article pages, which then helps advertise our digital distribution more. Finally, I adjusted picture sizes. When moving around the font sizes, it varied the spacing more, causing me to decrease the first picture on my first page, decrease the picture of the food, and increase the picture of the restaurant. Doing this helped make my page more eligible and clear/easy to follow, as well as improve the look of the two-page article spread to look more like a realistic magazine article.

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